you……………personally
…………your style and voice

…interiority and……rhythm
……………………..consideration
……………lyrical waltz, in a sense

……………….you
………breathe and hum…as though
.dancing………………so soft
………………..to see………..to touch
……to discuss

………………….in gradual development
……..circular format…….diagonal
…back again……..staircase moving along
,,,,,,,,,,,,,you aesthetically

……peel………………………..
………………….your spring

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